Saturday, March 31, 2012



Each person in this wonderful world surely had a wish that they want to achieve in their life. That is normal in human being life. Wishing to have something can be described in many ways. Maybe they want to have a latest gadget, a modern lifestyle, a big house at a peaceful place, and many more.

Thesis Statement: Same goes with me. I have something I wish to have too. I wished to have a good life until the last breath of my life. There are many things that I wish I could achieve.

First Main Idea
First of all, love. Why I start with the word ‘love’? This is because love is the most important things in human life, no exception in animals’ life too. Easy to say love is important to the whole living things in this world.

Supporting Detail :
i. The love from Almighty God (Allah s.a.w) and his beloved, Prophet Muhammad s.w.t
ii. The love from my beloved family
iii. The love from people around me especially my friends and teachers.

Second Main Idea

Furthermore, I wish to have a good career and get a big salary in my future. When I have a good career then get a big salary from my effort, I wish to contribute some of my money to bring happiness to others who are less fortunate in this world. So then, I can get the barakah in my life. That is the more important thing for me. I want to help others people especially Muslim in this country and generally in this world.

Supporting Details:
i. Serve my parents
- Bring them to Makkah again even they had go there for twice times.
- Try to fulfill what they want to have for their happiness.
ii.Going travel to anywhere I want to go in this world for my holiday with my beloved husband and family when I get married.
iii. Collect as much assets for my future life.
- the cars, houses, lands, and saving money.

Third Main Idea

Last but not least, happiness. No one in this world does not want to get their own happiness to face this full of challenges world. This is the final wish that can complete my beautiful life.

Supporting Detail:
i. Have a good husband that can lead me and our family to heaven in the afterlife.
ii. Have a good relationship with everyone around me.
iii. All my dreams fulfilled make me proud of myself and satisfied.


In conclusion, the wish to have something in life is important to bring us to working harder to get it for our satisfaction. For me, if I get the loves, good career and happiness, that would be good enough for me. When we fulfilled our wish, surely we will feel happy for the whole of our life. Like saying, ‘A thousand miles begins with a first step’. And a first step starts from a wish.


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